Wow, nice review @xXTehLordXx! You made some excellent points about the song. I have to agree with you on the bass - it is a little quiet and could be improved, and the wobbles feel like they could have some more power! I also agree that the crash cymbals aren't the best and could be replaced with better ones, along with the piano, and I also have to agree that the EQing could use some work as well! Overall, a very excellent and constructive review. Good job!
Alright, seriously though, the song felt...off in a way. I'm not quite sure what it is. Something about it just doesn't feel right. Even though that entire upper half of my review was completely sarcasm, I actually do feel like the piano and the crash cymbals could be replaced. It might just be me and my tastes though. The mixing and mastering was decent, but I feel like it could be improved. Overall, the song just felt a bit TOO calm. That might just me and my tastes again, though. Overall, pretty good job! Congrats on third place! :)