Congratulations on getting featured dude! Now if only I could accomplish that...
The intro's actually pretty boring and was far too long. The rest of the song was sorta "meh" to me too. The dubstep-ish stuff at 01:10 should've been louder. It felt way too quiet to be enjoyable and I had to turn up my volume. It also didn't have as much "punch" as I think it should have. But you are getting better. Keep working on it, and I can see you getting far. :)
- Evilgrapez