Evilgrapez's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Attack of the DoomStar]

Great job! Only real complaint was the animation, but aside from that it was very funny and everything was really good! Nice job!

[Alight]

Well, the animation was well done. I especially liked the animation of Sparker and Aquanna. The soundtrack also fit the mood and was pretty good. But then the story came in. Basically, this was my reaction by the end of it:

Wha- what?

The story didn't really make sense. Alright, so a Fire Boy and a Water Girl meet when suddenly BAM. Water Girl dies from a giant castle that randomly springed up out of the ground and crushed her. The castle magically lifts up to show Water Girl dying, and then dead a few seconds later. Fire Boy now wants revenge apparently, flies up to the castle, and obliterates it in one shot. Then a giant mech pops out of the rubble and transforms into a...human?! What?? Then the credits roll.

I'm sorry, but that didn't feel touching at all. You had only met the characters for about a minute before one of them gets killed off (literally: the character is introduced at 00:12 and dies at 01:10). You need to have the character alive for a little while so that when she dies, the reaction is much more emotional than just "Oh. Water Girl died I guess."

And the ending made no sense. Where did the mech come from? Why did it turn into a human all of a sudden? Where was Fire Boy? WHAT JUST HAPPENED THERE?!

I'm still giving it 3 stars for the animation, and another half a star for soundtrack. Good job on that. Work on your story and I think this might be pretty good. :)

- Evilgrapez

[Walk-Smash-Walk]

Just discovered this today. I love it! I hope someone makes a game based off of it someday! :D

[The raptor king of earth]

I was silent for the entire thing, then started laughing. I have no idea why - it wasn't even really funny. Well, good job. xD

[Rayman's Smash Origins]

That was clever! Especially the end! 5 stars from me!

JumpNJetz responds:

Thanks a whole lot! :D
-Jetz

[Animation Challenge Wk4-6]

I like how it was rated E, yet it had swearing in it.

Still, I liked it.

[Goat Runner]

The animation was okay...but MAN! THAT MUSIC!!

[Google+]

True dat.

Too bad they merged with NG today.